Grade 4&5 Concert Response Writing
Our Grade 4&5 concert was on March 15. It started at 9:00 am and finished around 10:00 am. While I was waiting, I could see the Grade 4 sining very joyfully! This concert was so better than last year! Throughout the concert, everybody was smiling very bright. So if I describe it in a color, it was a bright yellow concert! Overall, I thought the concert was very unforgettable and unforgettable concert because it was my birthday!
First there was the Grade 5 Band playing. They were the first ones to start the concert!! They were all playing in Unison and even though some people made mistakes, they just kept on going. The band played ‘Let’s Rock’ and ‘Mickey Mouse March’. It was so outstanding!When I was watching the bands through the screen I felt very Exciting because I was very excited to hear the songs and also I was thinking they were so awesome!!
Second, there was the violin duet which was me and Talya! We were one of the advanced strings. We played the song ‘Fiddle Time’ as our duet. I was a bit surprised that Talya made a mistake in the middle that she didn’t make when we were practicing in the rehearsal! Before I got on my stage for my duet, I felt so nervous because there were so many eyes watching me!!! But I did feel a bit excited because I got to do a duet on my birthday and it’s very unlikely to happen!
Lastly, all the Grade 4&5 singed a great song called ‘Have You Ever Seen the Rain’ for the finale! This was like the brightest and the happiest song we sang on stage. Everyone was smiling and I thought that everyone’s tedious faces were gone!
I thought the concert was so fast and it was so fantastic!
Overall, I thought the concert was very fun and unforgettable concert!
This is a response to Grade 4&5 Concert.
The purpose of the response is to retell and judge.
One thing I did well in this writing was telling what things happened in the concert like this that happened that didn't happen when we practiced and etc..
One thing I would change is to use more better words than fun, boring, sad.